Tuesday, February 1, 2011

My attempt at poetry

The tempo of the beating sun numbed coherent thinking.

My thoughts gasped for a moment’s breeze.

The soles of my feet cried out for a breather.

A rest it called, a moment’s rest it pleaded.

I consoled the pangs of pain ringing in my limbs, "patience is a virtue".

In the thick of day, in the soulless dusk, I trekked.

A voice pierced out, fragmenting the silence of the barren surroundings.

The milky deep tone saturated my crusty pores.

It soothed my passionately inflamed skin.

Moistened the shields of my iris

I clamoured to the call, “Who is there?”

It ignored my pleas for confrontation.

Disappearing into the abyss, I was left solitude once again.

My knees crumbled to the earth, no vigour left to dictate orders

Eyelids were sealing, arms were draping. A few seconds wait, and permanently
comatose.

Few seconds passed, my heart in arrest, and the beatific call was heard once more,

“Allahu Akbar, Allahu Akbar, La ilaaha illa-Lah”


4 comments:

  1. I have no words..except to say that this is beautiful, masha'Allah!

    I never knew you were a writer, sarky! You're one layer of surprises upon another. :)

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  2. SubhanaAllah.. A successful attempt, I must say. Very well written. Keep writing, I'm following you now. :) Salam Ukhwah

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  3. wow sarky, masha'Allah this is awesome!
    Now I understand why I don't see you around anymore! :p

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  4. hahaha, yoshi, I like to be unpredictable.

    Thank you Nianorman! I dont know how long it will be until my next attempt at a creative post with the load of coursework I have, but I'm super happy that you're now a follower!

    Lol Amtullah, you don't ever see me but I see you;)...haha.

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